A Present for Moon Dancer

My brother Shale was showing me this picture you made, and after telling him some things I noticed. He said you probably be happy to hear my opinion. So I'll apologize now if I sound rude, but for me it's easier to just be to the point when I critique.

First off the image definitely has the happy feeling to it, just like the ref picture I was shown. Though positioning wise I notice the some parts seem a little off. Like the pony in glasses, from what I can tell you shouldn't be able see her standing leg from behind the table cloth. And I don't think you really need to show that much of her leg bend for the hoof that sits on the table.

Just being nit picky here, but I do want to point out that Twilight Sparkles back ear should still be visible in this image. Since her hair doesn't have as much volume to it like say Pinkies' hair. Also I think it would be nice to see Twilight's back legs not so stiff together at attention, but in a more relaxed position.

Then I notice that the blue pony's body weight should be shifted on her two standing legs with how she drawn. Or I just recommend changing the back leg that in the air to be on the ground.

As for the green pony she seem to be missing a leg based on the angle she set at. Also for her it seem that she has a bit of different lighting going for her, like a window letting in light that doesn't seem to effect the others. And I don't if she to far to away to make a shadow or not, but it seems to me that there should be a shadow on the table cloth coming from her.

Overall I have to say this is an exceptional piece of art work. It really does show how much though you put into the overall design and details of the piece. Have to admit that this picture really captured me interest. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title=" (Smile)"/>